http://lalois.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lalois.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] te_chan01 2014-02-20 09:56 pm (UTC)

So sad, so nice, I liked it a lot (and not only because I NEED more TORN fanfiction, which is indeed true .__.)
Actually, the angst does not displease me at all, I am quite fond of it and I think Ryo is a good character to test it on; to be really honest, I came up with a "similar" prompt in one of my torn fics (yet to finish). Not the idea of the ghost itself, but with Ryo struggling with pain and sorrow as far as the idea of losing Ohkura is concerned. I hope I can finish it someday but it's complicated to convey those feeling if you're not in the mood... in the meanwhile, I am VERY glad I stumbled on your fic, so well-written and light as the breeze, thanks a lot for sharing *___*

and... why not write more RyOhkura çOç?

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